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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 11:51:58 GMT
Okay, so this obviously hasn't been released but here's what I think it might look like:  This is the actual one released  I took a wild swing with this and I was wondering what you guys think.  Note the USA flag on Guardian Angel and the Kyrgyzstan flag on Black Friday. Crit on the second is much appreciated. |
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 12:12:51 GMT
> "People's Republic; fast paced, high octane and whats more, you'll completely wish it were true" > " high octane and whats more..." > "whats more..." > "whats" You're dead to me, Matt. DEAD!  Another minor grammar-nazi is that I believe it should be "fast-paced", not "fast paced. Also I do believe it should be 'was' true, not 'were'. However, I stand to be corrected. Anyway, pedantry aside, they are really good! I think the continuous style is great. The logo on the Chinook looks a bit funky, but that's very minor and doesn't detract from their voluminous amounts of AWESOMESAUCE. However, I definitely don't profess to be even remotely good at graphics, so I'm sure Thomas can find something to moan about in that respect. |
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 12:23:13 GMT
> "People's Republic; fast paced, high octane and whats more, you'll completely wish it were true" > " high octane and whats more..." > "whats more..." > "whats" You're dead to me, Matt. DEAD! Another minor grammar-nazi is that I believe it should be "fast-paced", not "fast paced. Also I do believe it should be 'was' true, not 'were'. However, I stand to be corrected. Anyway, pedantry aside, they are really good! I think the continuous style is great. The logo on the Chinook looks a bit funky, but that's very minor and doesn't detract from their voluminous amounts of AWESOMESAUCE. However, I definitely don't profess to be even remotely good at graphics, so I'm sure Thomas can find something to moan about in that respect. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WHAT HAVE I DONE? And yeah, I don't like the logo or flag on the chinook but it's a quick fix. -Peoples Republic is the /actual/ next book out so the other two are copies of the style.- Taken from CF. Sorry to stick mine oar in, but I can't help but agree that it's kinda unfair to arbitrarily deny anonymity purely because you don't like that they're saying. I thought the whole point of the submission form was that you could post your true thoughts without risk of flaming against your actual account. I mean, sure you're entitled to disagree with it, but I can't help but feel it was kinda unjustified to peek in the logs. But meh. What's that? You don't like that they're saying? You mean what. |
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 12:36:32 GMT
 I SEE NO PROBLEM HERE |
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 12:41:36 GMT
 I DO. |
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 12:49:24 GMT
WELL YOU CAN DO ONE, FOOL! *runs off and sobs in corner* |
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 12:50:23 GMT
Don't cry. I just wanted to say that even the Nazi's can make mistakes.
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 13:06:50 GMT
TROLOLOLOLO *whoosh* What's that? Oh yeah, just the sound of my ego being reinflated! But yeah, I know. I merely pointed them out because I have a reputation to hold up. I'm sure if you went for a final version you'd ensure everything was tashty, plus I didn't mean it in a mean way. xP |
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 13:10:59 GMT
TROLOLOLOLO *whoosh* What's that? Oh yeah, just the sound of my ego being reinflated! But yeah, I know. I merely pointed them out because I have a reputation to hold up. I'm sure if you went for a final version you'd ensure everything was tashty, plus I didn't mean it in a mean way. xP For the record Will, I did that on purpose. Also, I know you didn't mean it to be mean ;D |
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 13:12:55 GMT
DAMMIT! I've been baited.
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 13:16:05 GMT
Nono, you go ahead with your feeling of moral well being but I guarantee you'll be reading through this looking for mistakes.
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Post by Will on Feb 27, 2011 13:26:13 GMT
Sorry, what? I was too busy analysing everything you've said thus far for spelling, grammar or syntax errors. xP
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Post by Palagrin on Feb 27, 2011 16:55:14 GMT
The first one is relatively good. Though you should probably get rid of the drop shadow effect on the guy.
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Post by Matt on Feb 27, 2011 18:14:22 GMT
You mean the silver outline type thing?
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Post by Palagrin on Feb 27, 2011 18:23:24 GMT
yeah, the drop shadow (or highlight in this case)
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